Rough Edit

Rough Edit 

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This is my first rough draft of the camera shots.
After doing this draft I decided to remove some of the clips toward the beginning so that it builds up faster, keeping the audience engaged. I also thought about breaking up and mixing the shots of the ballerina and horse rider putting their shoes on to make sure the audience can easily make the connection between the two main characters. I haven't yet taken into consideration sound. This is because I need to make sure I have the right order of clips before thinking about sound effects and adding the backing track as it might not fit in as I move around the shots. I have also decided to add in an establishing shot of the dance hall to introduce the audience to the location being used, this will help them frame their understanding of the situation.

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